TOEFL Essay #2 (Revised): Rise of Minorities

The Rise of Minorities

     In the field of science, 20th century was a milestone. Many new scientific advances were introduced, resulting in efficient transportation and communication, longer life expectancy and convenience in everyday life. Compared to the 20th century, citizens of the 21st century are wealthier and display more individuality in lifestyle. Not only in terms of science, many changes were brought in other fields of study especially  politics and culture. Some nations are declining, whereas some are facing an economic boom, and stepping up to world power. Overall, Asian and African countries are facing substantial growth, and they will continue to throughout the 21st century in economically and politically. 

     First of all, Asia and Africa will show significant economic growth. Most of southern Asia and Africa are underdeveloped, such as Nepal, Kenya and Malaysia. Much of the land is rural, and only a small portion is urbanized, leaving potential for modernization. A myriad of natural resources are to be mined in these areas. Valuable jewels, crude oil, and quality wood are ample compared to already developed countries. Also, plenty of cheap labor can also be provided from such countries. International conglomerates in many developed countries are already taking advantage of this fact, therefore contributing to the economic growth of those nations. 
     Furthermore, Asian and African population will grow tremendously. The religious ethic of many of Asian and African countries promote fecundity or prohibit abortion, such as Muslims, Islams, and Catholics, which consequently leads to outgrowth of population. For instance, in the 1990's, population of Africa grew by 3% whereas the average population growth of the world was 1.7%. This phenomenon will continue in the 21st century. With more aid from wealthier countries and advanced medical technologies available, the life expectancy in those countries is also expected to rise. Additionally, the average age of the population is young, which proves their potential for even more population growth.
      Finally, as a result of development of the two continents, they will have a larger voice in international organizations, such as UN. Biases showing disrespect regarding Asia and Africa, such as orientalism, should significantly decrease. Also cultural products along with traditions will spread throughout the world similar to how American culture is deeply embedded into many parts of the globe these days. Many African, Asian cultures are very distinctive and are able to be  commercialized. Not only commercial but  cultural ideas will become more widely accepted in the world, which may include Confucianism or religions such as Buddhism. They will be less influenced by other nations in domestic politics, and have more impact in diplomacy.
     In conclusion, Africa and Asia will grow powerful and have more impact in the international society. They have great potential to grow economically. Also, their population is sure to increase exponentially in this era. Power shift is a natural phenomenon that occurs time to time, and Africans and Asians are the likely ones to hold power after the Americans.